An editor is just o e person with an opinion and a style guide. When it comes to writing - especially fiction - there’s no right and wrong. Let the reader decide if it works for them.
Personally, I like the way you write, I like your stories, the way you get inside your characters and how you describe the settings in elaborate detail.
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Well-practiced speech pathologist now practicing to be a children’s book writer — emphasis on practicing.
